Like a very man, at 23… I have certain aim. .
Good status and money… Some one to love, And a bit of fame. .
I am putting in, and getting out… Relaxing and then running. .
Getting few results, And some efforts went in vain. .
My soften dreams are clouded by dark shadows of pain. .
And to shatter these clouds…I am waiting for that rain. .
Like a very man, at 23. . I feel like in a race. .
Some acts of mine embarrass me. . And some deeds to embrace. .
I am running in so hard. . Its harder to breathe. .
Its start of a carrier. . Still my struggling days. .
Ticking time 24*7. . My joys in a drain. .
My soften dreams are clouded by dark shadows of pain. .
To shatter these clouds. . I am waiting for that rain. .
Like a very man at 23. . I am aspiring some one to be. .
Disgustingly non serious. . A lazy lizzylee. .
Searching for options from my Pandora box. .
I thought i was smart. . Turned a Nerdistic geek. .
Time to realize my dear. . Time to use my brain. .
My soften dreams were clouded by dark shadows of pain. .
And to shatter these clouds. . I think. . I just spotted that rain. .
Not a man, but a boy, At 23. . I just realize. .
To accept. . Never grew up. . It sounds so wise. .
Better to take few words from dad. . And the grin in his eyes. .
And mom’s pat on the back. . It all feel so nice. .
This whole rhyme. . I have been crying. .
Waiting for rain. . Waiting for rain. . Not able to find. .
This love of ma and pa. . Not seeing. . Am i blind? .
Gotten that genie. . I just grew sane. .
Clouds are shattered. . Sky so plain. .
Showered by blessings. . I am drenched in that rain. .
i am drenched in that rain…
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Lovely poem and thanks again, for your visit and follow! 🙂
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pleasure… 🙂
I am not into cricket, so that info is interesting, but over my head. I have seen it being played in detective TV shows that are placed in Brittain, such as the Midsumer Murder series.
This is a lovely poem.
I had a chuckle over your self description. It seems to me that you are located in India? One day I will get there and see it for myself.
Thanks for stopping by my blog, appreciated.
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Thanks johanna for the time you spend on my blog. Hope you like it. Well ya right, i am from India and its a beautiful country. I am sure you won’t be disappointed once you visit here. 🙂
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Excellent, beautiful imagery! Thank you
thank you so much for the appreciation…. 🙂
I like all your words…but the last 3 lines the best: “Showered by blessings. I am drenched in that rain. I am drenched in that rain.” Yes…we all should be so grateful for the air we breathe and the blessing of life!
thanks johann,, yeah,, they are my favorite too… i wasn’t convince myself while writing this post,, but than ended up with these lines…
this is s nice poem 🙂
Lyrical like a song. Absolutely beautiful! Thanks for visiting my blog Rishabh…it led to my visiting yours. Blessings
appreciated… 🙂 glad to connect to like minded people…
So am I Rishabh! Blessings
What your gravatar writes about you – put a smile on my face.
🙂
Nice you read my new poem posting so quickly, Rashabh! Thanks for compliment. Your poem here says a lot! Maybe toooo much!!!! : ) I regret that you say in bio “probably risk to society” – same as recent Colorado murderer. Please. Not that! Yes, as in poem, we are “showered in blessings”. Be thankful. Go help others!
🙂 thanks for stopping by, dear… i really liked your work.. as for my “About Me” many people have given there reactions on that. please take it in a light manner and enjoy.. and thanks for your appreciation and kind words.. please be in touch in future.. 🙂
A lovely poem – we are all drenched in the rain of blessings, in some way or another. Thanks for visiting my blog.
thank you dear… 🙂
Out of the rain the rainbow appears, wonderful words and very powerful indeed. Thank you for sharing your talents. Clarabelle 🙂
Thanks for your visit to Hanukah. Great poem. Love David
Hi Rishabh your honesty is very touching and yes I have walked in the dry dusty desert of longing and also in the cold freezing plains of sorrow and regret but I found the wondrous rain and drenched my soul in it’s uplifting showers and now I’m refreshed eternally.
Thanks for your interest in our Blog.
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i am glad that you guys can relate to my blog. Its so nice to hear such kind words from totally unknown people, shows the goodness in the world. Be in touch and stay blessed.. 🙂
Beautiful!!!
Thanks for stopping by,we all wait for the rain.Lovely poem!
Thank you so very much for liking my poem ‘Regrets’. Your poem ‘Waiting for that rain’ is really thought generating – the words are made like a garland with meaning and emotional tinge in every thought.
Great blog ! I saw you liked mine so I wanted to read a few of yours. To actually see y sneak peaks ect you can like the facebook page : http://www.favebook.com/mylifeinablg !! 🙂
surely .. 🙂 clicked and followed…
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You can find link to mine also,, from there.. 🙂 be in touch
with simplicity, you tend to tell all that happens to all of us at this age!essence is great!:)
Thanks for the visit. I like your poem.
Thanks for passing by.
I love your drenched in the rain. Thank you for your visit so speedy – I had only just posted my bit of rain! All blessings …
beautiful poem. thanks for dropping by my post. I’ll read more of yours
very nice post indeed 🙂
A lovely poem indeed! Thank you for your visit to my blog and I will follow yours looking forward to great post!
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Such a lovely poem!! I enjoyed very much =)) Thank you so much for visited my blog and liked my entry. I cannot wait to read your entries more. 🙂
Interesting poem. I sense a depth and an honesty here, of which you have, perhaps, only scratched the surface?
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Very nice…
Beautiful write! God bless you and thank you for visiting my website! Look forward to reading more of your posts and seeing you around!
Thank you so much for the like! 🙂
After reading about you, I think you are an interesting boy, nice poem from a 23 years old. Very apt. Wish you luck, god bless you.
every thing is great except that i am not 23 but 25 yrs, 10 months , 29 days , 7 hrs, 5 mins, 25 seconds and counting… 😉
thanks for the wished by the way.. 🙂
So its an old poem? still , you are very young.
🙂 thanks you,, all my pleasure…
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A very beautiful, lyrical piece. 23 is an interesting age; it’s like the new “going out into the world” age in the modern world. Thanks for stopping by to like my last post in Backyard Philosophy. I appreciate it. Keep up the writing.
Cheers,
Brett
Really nice, slow thinking is considered thinking..cool!
Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and liking my poem, ‘stress’. Your works has really inspired me.
There’s something about that rain…..and waiting!
Enjoyed your blog post poetry!
Thanks for reading my “Writing to Heal”, there’s just something about story isn’t there?
Have a super day my friend!
Nice writing! Very poetic.
That’s really very nice.
Hey Rishabh, thanks for liking my reblog 9/11 as we experienced it. You sound like an interesting guy. Your poem was touching. Will check you out again! Take care!
Nice poem! And enjoy your youth my good man. Before you know it…
Beautiful poem. Came by to check out your blog and enjoyed the surprise. Thanks for the visit. So glad you enjoyed the post on staying motivated for success. Cheers!
This post made me remember.Why I love rain.Thanks for liking one of my blogs. 🙂
Thanks for liking my blog. Really enjoyed this post.
Thanks for visiting Hanukah. After a dry winter and a dry summer we were blessed with rain last night. Hope your arrives soon. Love David
Wow Rishabh. This is such a lovely poem. The image is so nostalgic. I don’t like rains, but this poem makes me long for some soft, cold droplets on me. Cleansing my soul and nourishing it with renewed energy. Will surely go though the other posts.
Thats a sweet comment… 🙂 thank you so much… god will surely shower some cold droplets onto you…. Stay blessed.. 🙂
Nice piece…a really enjoyable read
Truly enjoyed your writing… Gently passionate and thoughtful. Thank you so very much for “Liking” our post too: “I S-cream, You S-cream…” and hope you will decide to “Follow” us. We only post every 7 or 10 days so we don’t fill up your In-Box and hope to have something worth reading to say… Be Blessed Rishabh!
Rishab..Good one..Liked the combination of humor and satire..made me remember my 20’s too!!
it is fun… surely… after the careless rage of teenage, this is the time i realized the need to find my life’s moto..
Life’s Moto…heavy duty! Well all the best in your quest and if you succeed let me know how!!!
Profound and accessible. Two great characteristics for any writing to have.
Thanks for stopping by stillvoicing. Love your poem as i join with you in waiting…
That rain will continue to fall. Blessings to you and those you love.
Oh gosh – you made me cry – never grow up – grow up – I don’t know – glad you found the rain
I love it!
Lovely poem. Thanks for visiting my blog.
I can imagine those. And I would like to thank for liking my post “Similarity Between Baby & Dog”.
Thank you for subscribing to ‘mennonitepreacher’, and also, I looked around your blog site and got connected to some peace and hunger activists in Africa and in Asia. And that’s great for our church, too.
And I read each of your poems carefully—I like the words and thoughts and music a good deal. The rhyming patterns throw me a little and I seldom read rhymed poems (and have written only one in 30 years of poetry).
Peace,
Bill (mennonitepreacher.wordpress.com)
Thank you very much for liking my post. I’m off to make a cup of tea and then I’m coming back to you. All the very best alienatednation.
Wow! Speechless it was that beautiful.
I am 63 not 23 but feel pretty much the same. Thanks visit my blog.
My brother, i love your poem, and what your words from your heart speak, shows that you are a man! At each days ending i look back on hours of my day in reflection to see the things i did right and the things i did wrong, and praying to God, I hope he helps me correct them so i might not repeat the same things the next day. I ran around and had a lot of fun until the age of 25, i finally began to mature quickly not taking anything for granted anymore. You have a gift, that God has given to you, massage it , water it , give it your love and it will blossom and never lead you but will take you to a higher plain. You can write…no doubt but keep writing every whenever you have the chance. You will become a better man as you share with others the true side of you, put self down and become selfless and other will gravitate your way! Bless others with your skills and you will grow and mature quickly. I loved your poem my brother, and thank you for visiting my site! Have a wonderful and blessed weekend!
Race against the horses and secure your land of peace …
Thx for the like … I was 20 something a 1000 years ago lol.. race against the horses and secure your land of peace …
thanks for stopping by my blog. this piece particularly caught me nodding to self-exploration on my part, poetically sound and real. enjoyed it very much.
glad that you liked it… Stay blessed.. 🙂
So very deep. Thanks for sharing!
I like the use of rhyme, and the split lines.
I am awestruck, so beautiful.
AMAZING!
Hi Rishabh. Thanks for taking the time to visit my blog today and clicking on the Like button to my most recent post. Your blog is interesting and creative. Keep up the good work your doing here. I hope to hear from you again soon. Cheers!
Thanks for stopping by my blog…..
great thoughts…keep up the finger musing!
beautiful! such a great piece to read 🙂
Excellent poem. Keep writing from your heart. Your poetry is beautiful.
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Great poem and thanks for following me!!!!!
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You poem “waiting for that rain” is beautiful.
There is value in both the black and white piano keys. In fact, the black keys are very special. There is a trick. If two people sit down together and play just black keys…. it will always sound amazing. I guess there is unity in sorrow.
Touching
intriguing and thoughtful. I liked it. 🙂
Disgustingly non-serious, I like.
Thanks for the like on my post about surreal art!
I am drenched in that rain…just beautiful 🙂
Hi! 😉
wow! beautiful photo.
I’m in a bit of a hurry right now, but promise to come back
to spent some quality time with your text.
cheerio!
(and I dont mean the cereal 😉 )
serge
It was a slice of my own life. Universality of the poem or common experiences, I don’t know. I liked it; thanks so much. Go on, I’ll read you.
Lovely poem, so heartfelt 🙂 and Thank you for visiting my blog space x
nice thoughts and wonderful image. and thanks for the visit.
wonderful poem.:)
thanks for stopping by with a like on my latest post. I enjoyed reading this. Brought me back to some similar experience, which also made me write about rain. How different can people’s musings be?
THIS IS A GREAT POEM! THANKS FOR THE LIKE ON MY BLOG. TAKE CARE.
what a wonderful picture!!! the drops of rain, the hair on the arm, the B&W. love it!!
Those words create a brilliant image. Well done.
Really nice work. Thanks for sharing 🙂
poignant…but it’s lovely…