you crashed like a shoot of bullet. . Pinned straight in my head. .
paralyzed like a stone. . A glimple of you. . I am Stunned. .
You were plunged in. . my respiratory system. .
Making it hard to breathe. .
It felt like a cancer. . Degree four. .
This pain is reliving. . I want it more. .
Its my love. . And its grey. .
And i am falling. .
You were a predator.. I am just a prey..
Your leather studded jacket. . Seem so vigor. .
Like a viper. . Fetching my inner strengths. .
Squeezing my skin. Freezing my blood. .
Make me fail to stand. .
I am lying in the middle of street. . Cops think, I am drunk. .
I snort you smell. . Its vibrant. .
I am breaking few laws. .
Trying to ram your windows. .
Because the curtains are like fading my senses. .
Bullying me. . Leaving me uncontrolled. .
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Hi Rishabh! Thanks for stopping by thefirstgates and liking a post. Please drop by again any time.
Thanks for visiting my website. Your interpretation and writing of English on your website is very good, well done sir. 🙂
Appreciate your kind words… 🙂 be in touch john…
Beautiful and strong images, very nice.
very nice
very strong imagery like the way you write
thanks Ian… 🙂
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aawww… thats so sweet of you dear,,, thank you so much, 🙂
aawwww…. you said so sweetly . i liked it.
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great lines here! enjoyed reading!
Rishabh, thanks for always stopping by at Random thoughts :),. for a guy who is mismanaging life, you seem to be doing a pretty good job at poetry!
Thanks for checking out my blog Culeidoscope. I love ur writing, especially this one.. a lot said with not a ton of words, Great job!!
Rishabh you said to us a few Posts ago …i am glad that you guys can relate to my blog, I’m surprised that you can relate to ours, we do appreciate that you visit, it is very kind of you, I wonder are you searching for answers or just passing through ? either way you are welcome.
There was a time in my life that I was a victim of darkness, being held captive and in soul destroying bondage to my addictions but I was set free and now no longer feel their pain but I cannot claim to be the one to have put then to death in my own strength, although I chose by my words and actions to do so but I was empowered to break their control over me and so was then set free.
I noticed in one of your poems Rishabh you made mention to God, to me He is a reality, He is The Creator of all life, it comes from Him in Christ Jesus, I have no doubt He Loves me greatly and also that He Loves all Mankind including you, it is not His will anyone perishes eternally, it is their choice if they do. Below is a favourite Scripture of mine.
John 3:16-17 For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whoever believes in Him should not perish but have everlasting life. For God did not send His Son into the world to condemn the world, but that the world through Him might be saved.
Take care Rishabh – Christian Love from both of us – Anne
thank you so much anne, that is very kind of you to take time and share this valuable knowledge. I have visited your blog and formed a sense of appreciation for your work.
About God, he has always been so kind to all his sons/daughter. Thanks once again for this piece of beauty from Bible- The Holy Book.
Accept my regards and love for both of you,
Rishabh
Your words exude energy! Cheers 🙂
Beautifully written 🙂
Hiya, I am really glad I have found this information. Today bloggers publish just about gossips and net and this is really annoying. A good site with interesting content, that is what I need. Thanks for keeping this website, I’ll be visiting it. Do you do newsletters? Cant find it.
Hi Andy , I like your site and it looks great. Youre posts are wonderful. Your like on my site http://www.inspimind.org brought me here. Firstly thank you for liking my post.
I wish I’ll have good time following your blog. Happy writring.
Cheers & Good day !
Read Hi Rishab….Sorry for the `typo error bro.
Lots of strong, vivid and diverse imagery to think about here, fantastic post.
Wonderful blog…really enjoyed reading your posts…many, many blessings to you…Robin
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“degree four”… as in the tarot???? That’s what hit me.
Wonderfully written! vibrantly expressed the feel of getting mesmerized with love and pain… beautiful words! 🙂
ha ha ha……. too strong emotional outburst…..
however I feel the exact “pain” surpasses the words that deifne it 🙂
…………the beat of the heart…. and pain of rolling tears 🙂
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help! someone got cancer 🙂
lovely
That is the sweet pain of Love!
adequate description of “the edge”!
A good day for you.
Wow! This is some strong stuff! not sure whether to applaud her for having such an effect on you or hate her for turning you into that! Either way, well done in your expressions man!
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